Notes
on WRITING TO EXPLAIN and INFORM USING SOURCE MATERIAL:
This
kind of writing--expository writing--is part of almost all
other kinds of writing. It explains (exposes...) the Why or
How about something, a situation or a process, or what something is.
This is not to be an instruction manual, list or recipe, but an
explanation...Although it takes a position about some part of the
topic, this is not just a bland report or review of materials and it
is not a formal argument, supporting and defending a claim. Please define any technical terms and direct the
writing to a general reader, not an expert in the subject.
To empower the ideas and thinking, authoritative sources must be
included. [For Definition essays:
a
Definition Essay HOW-TO |
Loaded Words ]
Possible STEPS in producing E2:

- Explore possible topics |
Brainstorming |
Topic
Exp. Loop.
- Write 200-300 wds expanding Loop
parts 5 and 6 on the topic you want to use, then make an initial
thesis sentence
- Find at least 3-5
outside sources that can support your thesis and reasoning.
Wikipedia is fine for getting familiar with a topic, but look
for information you want to cite other more authoritative sources.
- Make an outline to structure your paper
(Paper
Planning Ex- optional)
- Write a rough draft, using the
thesis sentence and at least 3-5 sources
(Basic level 5 paragraph essay
can use 2-4 sources).
Organization of
paper |
Sample full MLA paperw/notes
- Using peer and instructor feed
back continue to work on the final form of essay.
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For
the full version of the paper, outside
sources of information (author and or web site title, etc.) will need
to be credited and introduced in a sentence (Signal
Phrases1
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Signal Phrases 2
) and as MLA parenthetical citation at
the end of
the material (author last name +page or paragraph number where the data came
from) Example: (Smith 24). MORE:
Within the sentence, next to the
material/idea used,
writers simply place in parenthesis, the
author's plain last name only
(no
initials, titles, etc.) and the page
or paragraph number of the information being cited, e.g. for an independent source, (Brown
34), or in a collection, e.g. (Brown in Faigley 57)--don't use "page" or "p." in
MLA. As in the example here, the period which ends the sentence
goes outside the close parenthesis mark. Also see:
OWL Citing Guide
Consider things like these
(unless class page has possible topics listed):
- the brief history of something, i.e. development of electric
vehicles
- what the "big bang" is said to be, how it was
conceived
- how dogs may have become "domesticated."
- theories of climate
change
See
some of these examples of expository/explanation/informational
writing.
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Process Analysis in Barry Lopez's
"Migration"
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Process Analysis in Richard Selzer's
"The Knife"
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Examples in Frank Trippett's "Loaded
Words"
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Barbara Tuchman's Historical
Narrative: The Black Death
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